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What does the sequence help a reader accomplish, and what gets lost when it is simplified?
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Hunt, Gather, ParentMichaeleen Doucleff · 45 weeksEXACT SOURCE EXCERPT
“Step 2: Give Kids Their Team Membership Cards Before I met Teresa and Maria, I organized Rosy’s schedule the way I thought all good parents should: when she wasn’t in day care, I always had an “activity” planned for her to do.”
Supplied book text; lines 1207–1210 · lines 1207–1210
THE OBSERVATION
What does the sequence help a reader accomplish, and what gets lost when it is simplified?
KEEP THE SCOPE VISIBLE
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Supplied book text; lines 1207–1210. Exact source words are separate from the editorial annotations on this page.
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